Taking on the Canon
A new student prize honors a Mawrter and the power of formal poetry.
The Susan de Sola Rodstein Derks Prize in Formal Poetry was established in memory of poet Susan de Sola Rodstein Derks 鈥84 with gifts from her family, classmates, and friends.
BMC junior Leela R. Smelser 鈥24 was awarded the first annual Susan de Sola Rodstein Derks Prize in Formal Poetry for 鈥渢he best portfolio of poems that gracefully utilize poetic form, whether traditional (sonnets, sestinas, villanelles, etc.) or new and invented forms.鈥
Of the winning work excerpted below, contest judge Moira Egan 鈥84 comments, 鈥淭his portfolio beautifully embodies Adrienne Rich鈥檚 old saying that form was 鈥榩art of the strategy鈥 like asbestos gloves, it allowed me to handle materials I couldn鈥檛 pick up barehanded.鈥 In contrapuntals, prose poems, ekphrasis, and a villanelle, the poet explores and explodes gods and monsters, myths and psychic mayhem, black and red, tooth and claw; with great sophistication, each form synergistically conveys the content, the meaning of the poem. Fierce, vivid imagery and powerful sonic patterns (鈥榓 crackling hellfire at the bottom of a ravine, the wind singing as it flows between the walls鈥) speak to the reader鈥檚 viscera. Nothing is simplistic, but there is a clear sense, if not of salvation, then, at least, of hard-won wisdom: 鈥榯he draw of sleep is heavy and sweet as / darkness falls layer by layer like organza.鈥
Revelation (Villanelle)
Take your grief to the beast.
Carry with you whatever lie you must tell yourself, your justification.
Offer it up, witness his feast.
The ones you love are already deceased,
and you, wallowing in the dregs of your deprivation,
take your grief to the beast.
Old wood cold against your knees, hands that shake from pieced
together tragedies 鈥 most of them of your own creation.
Offer it up, witness his feast.
Your sorrow, the libations, your pain, supplication 鈥 you鈥檙e his only priest.
He thanks you for the offering, bemoaning his insatiable starvation.
Take your grief to the beast.
It is a limited agony, mercy to come when you are released,
left with nothing but a hollow ache and newfound veneration.
Offer it up, witness his feast.
When you stagger away, sun rising in the east,
you accept the cost of salvation.
Take your grief to the beast.
Offer it up, witness his feast.
As inaugural student entrants polished their submissions this spring, contest judge Moira Egan 鈥84 and co-director of Creative Writing Airea D. Matthews met to discuss writing at 魅影直播 and the radical power of formal poetry.
ELIZABETH MOSIER: What experience with form do students bring to your poetry courses?
DEE MATTHEWS: My students have some sense of poems needing certain containers, but they don鈥檛 necessarily recognize what the container is named. We often enter into poems with rhyme because rhyme feels decidedly poetic. Form opens up for students as they think about how it lets them say what they need to say with concision and clarity.
As humans, we鈥檙e constantly trying to reconcile the paradoxical relationship between form and fluidity. I try to show students how they can have agency and freedom inside a form. Knowing the form well enough to break it from within is an act of revolution. Breaking something without knowing it is just anarchy.
MOIRA EGAN: Yes, yes, yes! For me, as a poet and as a teacher, it鈥檚 fun and rewarding to not break a single rule and talk back to the canon in its language: 鈥淒arling canon, now I鈥檓 going to school you on a couple of things.鈥
DM: Exactly. Using form shows range and the ability to code switch, to change registers between the contemporary and the canonical鈥攖o speak the canonical language and move poetry forward.
EM: What radical power does form liberate?
ME: Form is all the 鈥淔鈥 words: freeing, flexible, fun. Form brings ferocity that free verse doesn鈥檛. Form sets up expectations and constraints that push your imagination to places it might not go on its own.
DM: Music, particularly music composition, provides incredible forms. What would happen if you created a 12-tone scale with words? Form is a way to play, to challenge yourself. I want to create a contrapuntal mixed with a pantoum鈥攖hough I don鈥檛 know what that is or what to call it. After I mentioned this in class last year, a student brought in a contrapuntal pantoum. Holy cow!
EM: What are the particular challenges of learning to read and write as a poet at an academic institution like 魅影直播?
ME: I love, and felt terrified by, 魅影直播鈥檚 intellectual rigor. It鈥檚 good to set high standards for yourself, but perfectionism can keep you from putting words on the page. Ask yourself what you want a poem or a manuscript to achieve鈥攁nd don鈥檛 put on the editor hat too soon.
DM: It鈥檚 critically important for a poet to observe. I ask students what they observe in the work. Number the lines, pay attention to the enjambment, look at the structure, the rhythm, the story. Our discussion of a poem is based initially on what the writer is asking: Is what I do here effective? What can I do differently? Then during consideration, the readers give potential suggestions, what we call 鈥渃onsiderations,鈥 because the writer鈥攐r really, the poem鈥攄ecides what it needs. In the creative classroom, this dialogic model gives students a stake in others鈥 work, and the breadth and depth of discussion about how the poem is constructed teaches them about their own work.
ME: One of the great poets of observation, Marianne Moore (Class of 1909) comes to mind. To have our 魅影直播 sister as a model for what we do in the classroom feels nicely self-reflexive and useful.
EM: What role does reading poetry play in writing poetry?
ME: To be any kind of artist, you have to understand your origins, learn from them, and fight against them. What are you going to do with what has come before? That鈥檚 the exciting thing: incorporating and metabolizing those voices and infusing your work with those influences.
DM: If your neurons are firing, what鈥檚 the center? Who鈥檚 actively influencing you? For me, Robert Hayden鈥攂ut I would not know that had I not read Robert Hayden. I鈥檓 part of a burgeoning school of poets called The Detroit School, and it鈥檚 important to trace this lineage.
Reading poetry, you find unexpected connections, too. What does a Black woman from Detroit have in common with Anne Sexton? I asked myself. When you read, you have a conversation with the writer, and in those conversations the creative impulse emerges and eventually gets you to the page. Just read. Read everything. Ask questions. That鈥檚 how you become a critical thinker, which helps the poetic impulse.
Published on: 06/02/2023